Hmmm... he spends too much time talking about some things, and misses others altogether. For example, not a word about how to make sure your scope is oriented perpendicular to the bore, which is my own private challenge.
Still, it hits the basics. Make sure everything is tight. Start close. Don't move far until things are working properly.
I would seriously add "periodically check to make sure everything is still tight." I've had many a ring and mount work themselves loose over the course of a few hundred rounds, even with .22 rifles.
Oh! How about "Make sure the scope is mounted properly, and not rotated 90 degrees!" I see that happen at Kokohead 3-4 times per year. I usually give a disdainful snicker to myself before walking over and pointing out the issue, but then it happened to my friend "Dennis" while I was helping him sight in a new rifle/scope combo. We'd get it on paper, make the adjustments that seemed logical, and the bullet would miss the backstop in a totally unexpected direction. Took an hour of frustration before I suddenly realized what was happening, and ended up literally dropping to the ground, I was laughing at myself so hard!
Oh, wait, I do have one more thing to add. Bring a friend. Make sure it's someone who understands what you're up to, can either watch the spotting scope for you, and can spell you at the rifle when you stop doing your job properly.
Personally, I consider sighting in a scope to be a 3-day process. Not that it necessarily takes a lot of time, but once I get it pointed in the right direction on day 1, Iike to comeback fresh a couple of times and be sure that my shooting is consistent with it.