I've seen some questions on what legislators look for in testimony. As an aide, I read the bills and testimony prior to the committee hearings and meet with my rep to go over issues and concerns that I've found. My reps committees are education (k-12), higher education (college), water and land, and energy and environmental. I'm fairly new to this and I don't really know how everything works in the respective areas and what to look for. Reps should have a better idea since they have a lot more experience than I, but still they can't know everything which is what testimony and research are for.
For example, HB2117 Limiting standardized testing given to students in school.(
https://www.capitol.hawaii.gov/measure_indiv.aspx?billtype=HB&billnumber=2117&year=2018). I didn't know overtesting was a big problem in schools now. I don't know what the procedures are in the school system, options, and how anything works so it's very difficult for me to identify problems or tell if it's a good bill.
These are my thoughts on it, it'll be different for everyone.First thing I do is to read the bill preface sometimes written in the first section of the bill. It gives a summary of the bill, what it does, background information, and why it's needed. If you request a bill to be introduced next year, try and add a preface. I'll do some quick research online too. A lot of information will come from the testimony.
Testimony is usually favored in the following order, which I usually agree with:
1. Government (Federal, State, City)
2. Organizations (Unions, non-profits, businesses)
3. Individuals
What I look for:
1. Presentation - On official letter head, neat appearance, formatted well. Important points highlighted. This gives a good first impression and draws my attention. Clear and concise.
2. Credentials - What gives their testimony credibility? Directors, instructors, experience in the field, etc. As an example in HB1908 Multiburst triggers, Devin stated he was a business owner, FFL, and manufacturer which gave him credibility when he made specific technical details.
3. Specific - Point to specific parts of the bill. Be detailed in your explanations.
4. Use examples and experiences and other references to prove your point..
5. Know your audience - Most legislators aren't gun people. Write it so they can understand it.
6. Offer suggestions and alternatives (be specific) . How can you turn a controversial subject into a win-win.
7. Be polite and professional.
8. Pictures, charts, tables, links to videos, etc catch my attention and quick to analyze.
9. What is the outcome?
Other things
1. Putting your name and contact info gives your testimony more credibility and is more professional. If you have a good testimony, a rep could contact you for more information.
2. When I see a testimony with just "I Oppose" it doesn't do much for me, but at least adds to the count. At least a single line on why you oppose it helps a lot.
3. I've heard adding your address helps where your district rep may see it and pay more attention to it.
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